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BORDEN’S ICE CREAM

Script:

Hey! Remember Mom’s apple pie? Remember when she used to put a big scoop of vanilla ice cream right on top? You can bring back those days and that wonderful taste with Borden’s Golden Vanilla Ice Cream. Borden’s borrowed a recipe from the past, when vanilla ice cream was made with extra eggs. This way we get a richer flavor, a creamier texture, and a deep golden color that lets you know that old-fashioned look and taste of homemade ice cream is back in style. Was it ever out of style? BORDEN’S ICE CREAM.

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Practice Recording:

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:30 spot. Wanted to try something lighter.

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Peer Feedback:

wow hard to critique, because your sound is clear you are performing really well, maybe it's just ME but, again it feels that if this would be a longer (slower) commercial it would sound superb. Again it's on the button i just feel that it's too much copy or words for 30 sec.
Maybe i'm wrong anyway james you are doing very well in my opinion
All the best
Refards
Balazs

Peer Feedback:

With that rich, creamy, texture in your voice, who can resist... You skipped the emphasis, the first time the product was mentioned but overall excellent job. Best.

Peer Feedback:

James you got a good voice and you know how to use it.

Peer Feedback:

Thanks guys. Just had another couple of classes working with a couple of working professionals here in NYC. One voice talent and a casting director, in the booth working on commercials, promos and narrations. Just plugging away and trying to make progress.

Peer Feedback:

New York, New York. I want to wake up in a city that never sleeps ......Just turned green with envy and for dark guy like me, it's difficult, let me tell you! LOL!!!

Peer Feedback:

Wow! Where do I get some ice cream, and how do I get the smile off my face? That is what I have been wanting to hear from you. I'm gonna listen to it again. Be Well.

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