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    Ambien

    Script:

    There is a rhythm to life. We sleep at night - and wake in the morning. It's the sleep cycle that helps keep us in a healthy balance. But, for millions of Americans, sleep doesn't always come easily. For them, there's AMBIEN.

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    New to forum and voicing. Appreciate any feedback. --Cara Lee

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    Peer Feedback:

    For a newbie, you have a great feel for this business and a beautiful voice to go with it. Best of luck.

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    There's always something someone can find in just about any read but for starting out you've rounded third and are sure to make it home.

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    Great job, Caralee!

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    Consider that this is probably not a 15s read. I enjoyed the read, but it was pretty perky for a sleep aid. I have to say that that's probably not the right tone for a sleep aid! Something more 'dreamy' in tone would sell better here. Pace it for a 30s read with some video passing and give some delivery for someone trying to fall asleep and you'll have a winner. You have a really clean and positive tone.

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    Real, real nice voice, Caralee. Wonderful delivery, plenty of energy. But I'm with Tom when I say that there may have been a bit TOO much energy for a sleep aid spot. But not to take away from the quality of your delivery and that wonderful voice.

    Mike F.

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    ArlenChitty -- Thank you so much for the encouragement and the listen!

    Richurd -- Thank you so much! I'm completely flattered and looking forward to pursuing voicing this year instead of putting it off like last year.ha

    Jimbobway -- Thank you again for the listen and positive feedback! Cheers!

    TxTom -- Thanks for the detailed feedback. Woops, didn't even consider that it was probably not a 15s read. Newbie mistake. You're absolutely right, it is quite perky for a sleep aid spot.haha Kind of makes me laugh now when I listen back to it. The analogy of give some delivery for someone trying to fall asleep will really help to reshape this read. Thanks!

    Mike Forbes -- Yes, listening back to it now, I completely agree that it was too energetic. I had a done a few other energetic scripts before hand and I think I got stuck in energetic mode! haha Rookie mistake. Thank you very much for positive feedback on vocal tone. Cheers!

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    Durex - Bob Is An Idiot

    Script:

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    66 people have played this

    Practice Recording:

    Click to hear Bhart0206's recording

    I am a beginner with a new mic and new home studio. Any feedback on sound and performance is extremely helpful. Thank you!

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    Peer Feedback:

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    Always

    Script:

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