The Voice Actor Feedback Forum

For a newbie, you have a great feel for this business and a beautiful voice to go with it. Best of luck.

There's always something someone can find in just about any read but for starting out you've rounded third and are sure to make it home.

Great job, Caralee!

Consider that this is probably not a 15s read. I enjoyed the read, but it was pretty perky for a sleep aid. I have to say that that's probably not the right tone for a sleep aid! Something more 'dreamy' in tone would sell better here. Pace it for a 30s read with some video passing and give some delivery for someone trying to fall asleep and you'll have a winner. You have a really clean and positive tone.

Real, real nice voice, Caralee. Wonderful delivery, plenty of energy. But I'm with Tom when I say that there may have been a bit TOO much energy for a sleep aid spot. But not to take away from the quality of your delivery and that wonderful voice.

Mike F.

ArlenChitty -- Thank you so much for the encouragement and the listen!

Richurd -- Thank you so much! I'm completely flattered and looking forward to pursuing voicing this year instead of putting it off like last year.ha

Jimbobway -- Thank you again for the listen and positive feedback! Cheers!

TxTom -- Thanks for the detailed feedback. Woops, didn't even consider that it was probably not a 15s read. Newbie mistake. You're absolutely right, it is quite perky for a sleep aid spot.haha Kind of makes me laugh now when I listen back to it. The analogy of give some delivery for someone trying to fall asleep will really help to reshape this read. Thanks!

Mike Forbes -- Yes, listening back to it now, I completely agree that it was too energetic. I had a done a few other energetic scripts before hand and I think I got stuck in energetic mode! haha Rookie mistake. Thank you very much for positive feedback on vocal tone. Cheers!

I loved listening to your voice and could see your smile, it seemed a little rushed, maybe because it was, or maybe I just wanted to hear more.
Be Well.

your voice sounds pretty good on this. you chose good points and words to hit and it flows well. I would try it slowing it down a little bit.
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Sounding seasoned and amazing. Add more conversational tone to "idiot". No need to increase volume on "may not be". Keep going for claiming new you are doing great !

Smooth read and with a good dose of character. Pacing was good, didn't feel rushed or stretched out. The audio quality could be a bit crisper, there is almost a tangible soft wall between you and the microphone that reduces the crispness of you voice. All in all, great read!