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Script Genres > English Children > Commercial > Travel & Entertainment

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    Walt Disney World Resort

    Script:

    It’s a magical time to take your little characters. Is your living room a living storybook? Is there a princess on your couch who looks a lot like your little girl? Or a little beast roaring through the room? Then, it’s the perfect time to introduce your child to the world where that magic is real. – Walt Disney World Resort. Call today for your FREE Vacation Planning Kit. You’ll get everything you need to know to plan a Disney Trip with your preschoolers, and discover the magic through their eyes. Call 1-800-225-3124 for a Free Vacation Planning Kit.

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    Practice Recording:

    Click to hear Keubanksseason's recording

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    Peer Feedback:

    I really like your voice, but it seems like you left something on the table with this one. The script really invites enthusiasm and emotion. Maybe something to add?

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    Peer Feedback:

    You can protect your software easily, and I want to recommend one website for this purpose. Follow the link and about it.

    Peer Feedback:

    I came to this strange world
    Hoping I could learn a bit about how to give and take https://fireboyandwater-girl.co

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    Winter Playland- Fun Childlike attempt

    Script:

    For Radio 30s: Attempt at Child (5-12)...

    "Roll out the wagons.
    Hoist the flags!

    Polish the ice rink and clear the tubing lanes.

    All systems are SNOW at the ultimate mountain playground

    where kids become kings and queens of the snow fort

    and kidults (emphasize) discover they can stillllll PLAY down the law.

    Unleash your inner kid and drop into the magic of the mountains.

    The slopes are OH so happy to SKI you.

    Because at Keystone - today, we play

    Pack in the FUN...by picking up your Epic Pass!"

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    Audition Recording:

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    I'm not sure I met the exact child like range, but it was so much fun trying to fit it into 30seconds (not including the slate)

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    Peer Feedback:

    Really great read, and the sense of warmth, generosity and fun was definitely there in your voice! For my money, you absolutely met the child-like-range, and given you have access to those higher pitches without sounding shrill, that would be an exciting direction for you to explore. Well done fitting such an expressive read into 30 seconds. It didn't sound rushed at all. It might be worth seeing if you can take out any hints of a glottal stop throughout. It was very slight, but I heard it two hints of it. (epic and magic of the mountains...) Well done!

    Peer Feedback:

    I really enjoyed your performance! You definitely nailed the child-like range and I was completely impressed that you did that whole script in 30 seconds! It didn't sound rushed at all, excellent enunciation, and the total enthusiasm that you projected was incredible! Keep up the great work!!!

    Peer Feedback:

    Recording quality sounded great. Performance was very good! I can see your voice in animation! I loved your enthusiasm and pep that you maintained and I feel like your voice had the 'child-like' vibe you were hoping for. My only 'critique' for this is that the first two sentences "Roll out the wagons, hoist the flags" had a totally different tone. I felt it started like a musical. I would try a second read with that bit read less musically and start with some sort of lead in that you edit out "hey parents lets Roll out the Wagons.." Great job Christie, that was excellent. I think you will be in animations and commercials in no time!

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    Umpa Lumpa

    Script:

    Umpa lumpa
    doopedy doo

    I've got
    another puzzle
    for you

    Umpa lumpa
    doopedy dee

    If you are
    wise, you'll
    listen to me

    Who do you
    blame when your
    kid is a, Brat?!

    Hand bred and
    spoiled like a
    Siamese, cat!

    Blaming the
    kids is a lie
    and of, shame

    You know
    exactly who's,
    to, blame

    The mother
    and the
    father

    Umpa lumpa
    doopedy da

    If your not
    spoiled then
    you will go far

    You will live
    in happiness
    to

    Like the
    Umpa lumpa
    doopedy doo

    Contributed by Richurd

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