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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

    Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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  • #94953
    gwenthevoice
    Participant

    Hi everyone! I am practicing for a commercial demo. Looking for feedback to this Nutro dog food ad. For starters, here are some questions I have:
    Does my read sound conversational?
    How is my diction?
    Working on my pace – how is it?
    Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
    How is my audio?
    Thank you in advance!

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  • #94941
    AirlinesOfficeDesk
    Participant

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    • #94944
      rjoesbury
      Participant

      Hi all, first time poster. Looking for feedback on pacing, breathing, sound quality and voice. Thanks.

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  • #94868
    Kim Meade
    Participant

    Please review and provide constructive criticism of my Coronavirus public service announcement.

    Thanks

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    • #94924
      gwenthevoice
      Participant

      This is a good audio, good pace, relatively upbeat. You have just a bit of mouth noise but that can be reduced. Check out Waves plugins. Particularly, the Waves NS (noise suppression) and the Waves DeEsser.

  • #94844
    Frantz
    Participant

    Hello everyone, just practicing here- creative feedback regarding my tone/flow/pace is appreciated!

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    • #94925
      gwenthevoice
      Participant

      Your voice is almost musical! 🙂 Good pace, good pitch. One minor thing… On the grammarly script the word ‘meet’ disappears… You seem to rush through that. Beyond that, I would not change a thing.

  • #94641
    waninick
    Participant

    Hey gang. Wanted to post something to see if my audio stack is up to the task. This is a clip where the first part is dry, straight from the mic. It is then repeated with R10 De-click, De-Noise, and ProEQ3, all in Studio One 6.5 (not the Pro version).

    Any feedback is welcome. Thanks.

    TimG

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  • #94521
    MattSchonberg
    Participant

    Hi all! Working on my second demo now, doing some between classes practice/homework recording commercial practices, any feedback is appreciated.

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    • #94691
      Terra Ashe
      Participant

      Hi! You have a very bright and positive tone with this, which I think is right direction for it. I think it could be a more conversational(you had a fabulous conversational part at the “no promises on less mess but definitely…” section try bringing in more of that) if you don’t already have someone specific you are telling about this. One other thing, there is a lot of this vs that in this script, play with those differences more. Good job!

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    Marguerite_54
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    Marguerite_54
    Participant

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  • #94277
    Kay165
    Participant

    Hi everyone! I’m new on here, and to voiceover, and would appreciate any feedback at all you could give me please, as I am putting together my first narration demo. No technical though please as these were recorded on my phone 🙂

    Thanks in advance 🙂

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    • #94289
      Treva Dean
      Participant

      These sound great! I’d say the Seinfeld sounded a bit rushed, like maybe it was the first one you recorded and you were nervous about it, but not so much that didn’t still flow well. In the Amelia Earhart one, the inflection on “pioneering pilot” just sounded a little flat compared to the lovely lilt the rest of the sample had. Overall, though, seriously good work!

      • #94344
        Kay165
        Participant

        Thanks so much Treva! Really appreciate your comments and time 🙂

  • #94205
    Karen Maria
    Participant

    Hi everyone, first-timer here looking for some creative feedback (no technical notes, pls) as I learn and practice. How are things with my pace/cadence, tone, does it sound authentic/conversational enough? Is the read smooth or choppy? Looking forward to your thoughts, thanks in advance.

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    • #94690
      Terra Ashe
      Participant

      Nerds
      -Nice pace, I would just slow down that first word, maybe give yourself a lead in to start.
      AGI
      -Lovely tone! I think you could have a bigger tone shift between the stated problem in the first line and then going into the solution.
      Dovato
      – you have a nice empathetic voice here, keep the empathy and add some more brightness to it, you are giving someone something that could really improve their quality of life. The end is a little choppy.
      Loreol
      – I think your tone and pace are good here I think it just needs to be a bit more conversational. Try to have a very specific person in mind who you are talking to and telling about this awesome new mascara you just started using.

      Overall good job!

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